Manga project

Beberapa minggu yg lalu gwe ngecek penerbit Tokyo pop dan kynya syarat mereka tinggi banget. N gwe merasa klo gambar gwe tuh banyak banget kurangnya klo bedasarkan semua yg mereka minta.

So far gwe udah beli buku tutorial manga, plus beberapa referensi laennya.
Gwe habisin waktu buat latihan bikin expresi2 wajah, n nge design ulang characters. Sampe sekarang gwe masi belom nge gambar setting2 ruangan2 yg bakal gwe masukin dlm cerita.

Tentang plot, terus terang gwe masi bingung. Jadi ya gwe ubah total dari plot semula gara2 kebanyakan characters.

Alasan gwe bikin ini topik tuh cuman minta tolong kalian kasi kritik ke gwe soal semuanya, cerita plus gambar gwe. Tolong jujur, pedes gpp, soalnya ini mau gwe serahin ke penerbit.

4 character penting gwe udah gwe gambar, cuman belom gwe tebelin/ di warna.So I'll post the pictures later. Yg gwe butuhin soal characters development-nya itu penjelasan ttg characters (Penjelasan characteristicnya singkat, padat, n jelas ato nggak?). Nilai aja sampe 10, OK?

Characters

Jink Shuin
Gender: Female
Age: 17 (of both Heaven and Earth age)
B-day: Mid-autumn
B-place: Richmond, BC, Canada
Type: A
Height: 153 cm
Weight: 38 kg
Occupation: Heaven Empress
Status: Married
Likes: Hair accessories
Dislike: Banana (it's monkey's food), to be alone

Personality:
She acted indifferently towards whatever she likes or dislikes, she seems to dislike everything. Yet, behind her picky attitude, she's actually a sweet girl.

Hobby:
Daydreaming, writing diary

Ideal man:
a guy like Edwin (though she doesn't know why she had a crush on him)

When sad:
write diary in a quite place

When having hard time:
get panic and messed up

What's happiness?
"Happiness is a feeling to see whoever I love,"

History:
An average Chinese-Canadian high school student who was going to study aboard after her graduation. Apparently she was brought to the Hell by the Hell emperor (Won) because of her similarity to his aunt in the Moon. While she escaped from Hell castle, she entered heaven by accident. She's also mistakenly married to the man she met in the river. That man was actually the heaven emperor who was forced to get married soon.

Jinkun Shuin
Gender: Male
Age: 19 (of heaven age)
B-day: Beginning of autumn
B-place: Heaven palace
Type: B
Height: 179 cm
Weight: 67 kg
Occupation: Heaven Emperor
Status: Married
Likes: Green tea
Dislike: The crown (too heavy), rudeness

Personality:
His charm and his charismatic are the main reasons for having the throne. Though he smiled a lot, he's actually a very strict person. And everyone loves him.

Hobby:
Practicing aikido, reading

Ideal woman:
Not interested in any of them

When sad:
Go to dojo for more training in order to forget

When having hard time:
Stay calm and think of a solution

What's happiness?
"A reward after getting through all of the difficulties,"

History:
A heaven crown prince who lost his parents and took over the throne by the previous emperor's will. He spent most of his time in the palace, yet he also managed to socialized with the residents of heaven. His refreshing look made most of the female residents fell for him. Though he's popular, he's not interested in any of them and refused to get married while the will asked him to do so. While he ran away from the date arrangement, he met Lynn in the river. Though it's only their first time to see each other, they were thought as lovers.

Won Shuin
Gender: Male
Age: 18 (of heaven age)
B-day: End of spring
B-place: Heaven palace
Type: AB
Height: 180 cm
Weight: 70 kg
Occupation: Hell Emperor
Status: Single
Likes: Modern sports
Dislike: Hell castle court (boring n too much stuff in it), to be left behind

Personality:
No one able to beat his passion towards sports, therefore he's physically strong.Because of his strength he became arrogant and foolish.

Hobby:
Practicing aikido, watching the moon

Ideal woman:
Pretty girls, just like his aunt

When sad:
Punch people or something around

When having hard time:
Becomes wild and harsh

What's happiness?
"To meet and marry his ideal girl,"

History:
Jinkun's younger brother who took over the hell's throne by his father's will. He happened to be interested in Lynn (Jink) due to her similarities to Illiya (his aunt in the moon). He felt that he owns Lynn, since he was the one who picked her up from the earth. Therefore he pursued Lynn to go hell and accompanied him wherever he goes.

Yuki
Gender: Female
Age: appears to be 19 or 20
B-day: Mid-summer
B-place: Neo City, KY, Hyera (imaginary country)
Type: O
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 57 kg
Occupation: Goddess of Snow
Status: Single
Likes: Cosmetics and accessories
Dislike: Sweet stuffs (she's always on diet), to be forgotten

Personality:
High confidence was the main part of her attractiveness. Therefore she hated to lose from anyone. Her dream's to be the empress and number one in everything.

Hobby:
Gossiping,browsing

Ideal man:
Any popular hot guy

When sad:
say anything which would makes others give sympathy or guilty towards her

When having hard time:
grabbing people attention by any chance then ask for help

What's happiness?
"To see others feeling happy, like me,"

History:
She killed the goddess of wood (Lynn's ancestor) with the reason of her jealousy. Years had passed and she was almost to be an empress. However, Aoi returns as Lynn and became an empress. Her effort meant nothing at all. Therefore she tried to dethrone Jink by any chance and to win Jinkun's heart.

sedikit info:

eeto~ klo kmu emang maunya mendalami dunia per-komikan dan bukan dunia illustrasi, menurutku gambarmu harusnya uda lebih dari standar deh.

chou menurutku untuk dunia per-komikan uda bisa banget masuk. klo ditambah dengan angle2 yg lebih bervariasi lebih asik lagi.



cerita buatan chou itu... erm... yg jelas requires a lot of nature backgrounds, fighting scenes, etc which is a very hard work lol

apakah chou kira2 sanggup membuat fighting scene dan BG nature? FYI kedua ini salah satu rintangan terbesar menggambar. ^^;; bnyk komikus pro yg blang mereka bingung dengan fighting scene karena pose2nya ga umum di lihat n lebih sulit dibayangin di otak.

terserah juga sih mau ngestart careernya dari komik jenis apa. ceritany uda bagus bgt kok. asik bacanya.


tp klo ga sanggup
mungkin bisa dimulai dengan membuat komik yg ga gitu rumit dulu kayaknya semi-gag manga. plot ini masih dsimpen dulu.


siapa tau mau ngikutin jejak Obata-sensei yg awal2nya bikin manga kayak Hikaru No Go dan ujug2 muncul dengan manga keduanya yg super keren alias Deathnote.

kesannya lebih bersensasi *ngaco*