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kuro twinfire
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Age : 28
Registration date : 13.01.08
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|  Subyek: art of the black (kuro's art)  Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:08 pm | |
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Misaki'chi'
single star student
 Jumlah posting : 1794
Age : 31
ability : Special Ability
Class : B-Junior High School
Alice : Teleport Alice
Registration date : 06.04.08
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Star Rank: Single Star
Location: Pindah2 gr2 alice gw =))
Self Quote: "Saintlike ... I'm holey."
| | Subyek: Re: art of the black (kuro's art) Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:19 pm | |
| GYAHAA... Black.. Black.. Kuro....  emm.. bagus semua.... apalagi yang no.1... bagus bgt.. | |
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kuro twinfire
single star student
Jumlah posting : 546
Age : 28
Registration date : 13.01.08
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Star Rank: Single Star
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Self Quote: aku adalah aku ~(-_-~)
| | Subyek: Re: art of the black (kuro's art) Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:28 pm | |
| emg itu yg terakhir  | |
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Mientsviel
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Jumlah posting : 3026
Age : 31
ability : Technical Ability
Class : B - Junior High School
Alice : Pharmacy Alice
Registration date : 19.03.08
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Star Rank: Student Agent
Location: nyasar (lagi)
Self Quote: The right way isn't always going to be in front.
| | Subyek: Re: art of the black (kuro's art) Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:59 pm | |
| gambar 1. kepala bagian rambut kurang proporsional sama mukanya, senyumnya manis bagt tapi  gambar 2 matanya agak kebesaran utk muka segitu, tapi kawaii~~ gambar 3 tangannya agak kepanjangan utk tinggi segitu, bentuk badan juga kurang proporsional dg tinggi badan. gambar 4 perwanaan mukanya agak kurang, tapi sisanya bagus, apalagi rambutnya <-- maniak ijo siggy fate/stay night aaah~~ rin~~~ bagus banget sayang render & background kurang nge blur nice job | |
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kuro twinfire
single star student
Jumlah posting : 546
Age : 28
Registration date : 13.01.08
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Star Rank: Single Star
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Self Quote: aku adalah aku ~(-_-~)
| | Subyek: Re: art of the black (kuro's art) Mon Apr 21, 2008 5:03 pm | |
| 1= iya bener
2= style saya << halah ngelak xD
3= iya bener
4= itu gw ketipu ma layar laptop *finishing di laptop soalna* << ngelak lagi xD
siggy=maklum karya lama xD akan gw latih deh... | |
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Kuripura
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 Jumlah posting : 4563
Age : 32
ability : Special
Class : High School B
Alice : Sweety Alice
Registration date : 13.01.08
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Self Quote: Because I feel like it.
| | Subyek: Re: art of the black (kuro's art) Mon Apr 21, 2008 5:17 pm | |
| gambar 1-3 mukanya... bentuknya rada "deformed" ^^;; Yah, emang wajar sih. Biasanya yg gambar pake struktur aja masih deformed, apalagi yg engga.
gambar 4 --> masih banyak yg putih2 dan masih kurang rapi. arah cahaya masih rada kurang jelas darimana dan tidak ada shadding di bagian hidung yg ngebuat hidungnya keliatan rata dan cuma garis doang, ga semi-3D. emang ini style anime, tp perhatiin deh. di anime juga masih ada sedikit shadding di hidung. Kurang tegas juga shaddingnya.
[edit] weks kayaknya ak ngasihnya kritik doang. Anyway, ak sih suka2 aja ama style gambarmu. Klo mau yg matanya besar bgt juga gpp sih. Karena kmu emang manga-ish bgt. Ada kok mangaka yg stylenya begitu. tp proporsi tetep diperhatikan ya. ^^ | |
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kuro twinfire
single star student
Jumlah posting : 546
Age : 28
Registration date : 13.01.08
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Star Rank: Single Star
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Self Quote: aku adalah aku ~(-_-~)
| | Subyek: Re: art of the black (kuro's art) Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:43 pm | |
| deformed? ah yah... nda bisa real, max semi-real ^^; proporsi gw juga g begitu bisa, sedang dilatih makasih masukkannya... | |
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Kuripura
Student Agent
Jumlah posting : 4563
Age : 32
ability : Special
Class : High School B
Alice : Sweety Alice
Registration date : 13.01.08
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Star Rank: Student Agent
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Self Quote: Because I feel like it.
| | Subyek: Re: art of the black (kuro's art) Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:08 pm | |
| Ga perlu real. Tp kebayang ga sih ngeliat Lellouch dengan kepala rada peyang? Rada serem kan? Begitulah kira2 | |
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Mientsviel
Student Agent
Jumlah posting : 3026
Age : 31
ability : Technical Ability
Class : B - Junior High School
Alice : Pharmacy Alice
Registration date : 19.03.08
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Star Rank: Student Agent
Location: nyasar (lagi)
Self Quote: The right way isn't always going to be in front.
| | Subyek: Re: art of the black (kuro's art) Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:17 pm | |
| kalo aku di depan meja taro cermin yg bisa full body, jadi kalo mau ngegambar gampang liat proporsi tubuh asli, jadi ngga ngaco, ato bisa ngikutin step˛ di buku˛ panduan menggambar spt : How to Draw & Creat Manga by Tatsu Maki, tapi itu jenis badan˛ heroik gitu sih ^^, cuma berguna kok. | |
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kuro twinfire
single star student
Jumlah posting : 546
Age : 28
Registration date : 13.01.08
Char Sheet
Star Rank: Single Star
Location:
Self Quote: aku adalah aku ~(-_-~)
| | Subyek: Re: art of the black (kuro's art) Wed Apr 30, 2008 4:34 pm | |
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